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The Beat Goes On by ~arnorath:iconarnorath:



Pain, strain and desperation
Pleading to get out
Wandering, no destination
Nowhere to go but where i've been before

Fate, hate and final submission
Crowding in my head
Fighting, no recognition
In the rage of life sweet silence is no more

The music of my heart beats slowly
In a symphony of ageless lines unread
The rhythm of the world is out of time again
But the beat goes on, the music never ends

Levity and incandescence
A momentary escape
Draining my vital essence
I gave so much to you, and now you're gone

Incense and burning buildings
Light the strangled night
My shallow grave filled in
With memories of loves lost and enemies won

The music of my heart beats slowly
In a symphony of ageless lines unread
The rhythm of the world is out of time again
But the beat goes on, the music never ends

The black nocturnal world turns slowly
In an eternal serenade of silent lies
The hole in the world bleeds the midnight away
And the beat goes on as the body dies

The beat goes on as the fading daylight hides
©2008-2009 ~arnorath
:iconarnorath:

Author's Comments

i sat down one day and i was like 'zomg, i are gonna write teh emo poetryness', so i did. i'm aware that it isn't very good. hope y'all enjoy it.

=EDIT= - tweaked the chorus and a couple of the verses. i think it's less crappy now, but i'll probably come back to it again later.

==Arn==

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:iconpentacle-witch:
it is a very emo poem. death is everywhere!

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Left-Handed and Proud!

New Age Thinker!

REMEMBER - EVERYONE SEEMS NORMAL UNTIL YOU GET TO KNOW THEM.
:iconarnorath:
indeed. i'm not generally a fan of emo poetry, though i know that there are some very good pieces out there, but unfortunately this not one of them. <sigh> i guess i'm just not angsty enough.

thanks for the fave!

==Arn==

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lazy perfectionist
:iconpentacle-witch:
i'm not really into that emo stuff either. i did like this one though.

well maybe not, but at least your weird that makes up for it and also being cynical. LOL!

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Left-Handed and Proud!

New Age Thinker!

REMEMBER - EVERYONE SEEMS NORMAL UNTIL YOU GET TO KNOW THEM.
:iconpentacle-witch:
i like this better. :)

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:iconblaghman:
hmmm, reading parts of me makes me thing of the song "bittersweet symphony". Improved on the previous version also.
:iconarnorath:
thanks. i think the appeal of emo poetry is the fact that it's so easy to write - all you have to do is cram as many death metaphors as is possible into a verse structure as fragmented and uninspiring as the mind can conceive, and then tie the whole thing off with a couple of overused cliches. there's not a whole lot of talent involved, but it's kinda fun sometimes.

==Arn==

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lazy perfectionist
:iconarnorath:
thanks, me too.

==Arn==

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lazy perfectionist
:iconblaghman:
This gives me an idea, your next piece should be a huge epic, using huge amounts of similes and metaphors and stuff, and finally at the end its just the emo describing the blood from its wrist... I just realised how messed up that sounded...nice.
:iconpentacle-witch:
you're welcome! :)

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New Age Thinker!

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