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A portrait on a wall
A record of a life
A Memory of a loved one
Someone's husband, someone's wife

A picture in an album
A photo in a frame
A moment of perfection
In a lifetime filled with pain

An instant caught on a film roll
Reborn in the dark
When the faces emerge from  crimson light
They are eternal; unchanged, unmarked

A long-remembered moment
Immortalised in film
Once, the pictures moved and breathed
Now they all stand still

All great and famous artworks
Painted, sculpted or drawn
Began their lives as a simple photograph
In the dark, waiting to be born.

And when they greet the daylight
And rise out of the dark
The artist's love is preserved forever
Inside one beat of his heart

But sooner or later the photographs
Will lose their clarity
And become quiet, idle moments once more
That only one eyne can see

At the moment this was taken
Life had just begun
But now the frame is shattered
And this roll of film is done
©2008-2009 ~arnorath
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wrote this in my lunch break at work today, the result of one of my patented random bursts of creativity. hope you like it.

==Arn==

EDIT: added a two new verses, changed the order of some others. i think it makes better sense now.

==Arn==
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I like it! However, I think the last stanza beginning with "All great and famous artworks", is unnecessary. That stanza could be a piece by itself.

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"...and it is ignorance that is our deepest malady."
~ J. Michael Bishop
to an extent i agree with you, i know that the last stanza doesn't really fit, but i was reticent to do away with it entirely because it continues the theme of rebirth i was going for. i think maybe i need one last stanza to tie into the existing ending and make it all make sense...

thanks for the feedback

==Arn==

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I AM A SEXY SHOELESS GOD OF WAR!!!

if she's an organ donor, it's not necrophilia
I love this, it makes me want to try and sing it :D

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She recently had a little mishap with a screwdriver... and by 'little mishap' I mean that she got one stuck in her brain....
this is really good. nicely done.

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Left-Handed and Proud!

New Age Thinker!

REMEMBER - EVERYONE SEEMS NORMAL UNTIL YOU GET TO KNOW THEM.
thanks.

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I AM A SEXY SHOELESS GOD OF WAR!!!

if she's an organ donor, it's not necrophilia
thankyou very much. i'm still not 100% happy with it; maybe i'll work on it more later on.

thanks for the fav.

==Arn==

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I AM A SEXY SHOELESS GOD OF WAR!!!

if she's an organ donor, it's not necrophilia
yeah, it does need something. otherwise i like it. your welcome!

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Left-Handed and Proud!

New Age Thinker!

REMEMBER - EVERYONE SEEMS NORMAL UNTIL YOU GET TO KNOW THEM.
too bad I can't sing...

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She recently had a little mishap with a screwdriver... and by 'little mishap' I mean that she got one stuck in her brain....
For one I'm being serious, and I feel your pain over the not-quite-right-ending. Having written many things in my life, I always find the ending the hardest, just trying to get that little bit extra to fit in, and finish it up. On that theme I once did a conclusion for an english essay in iambic pentameter. But nevertheless, I like it.

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